How New Authors Can Keep Their Manuscript Coherent

>are clear about the message they are trying to
convey. If it is not clear to you, how can you
In large publishing houses, many manuscriptswrite it in such a way that it is clear to your
penned by first-time authors, never make it pastreaders?
the "first reader" who for all practical purposes isUnfortunately, you cannot find the answer to why
a gatekeeper of sorts. This person's job is toyou are writing your story in this article, or in any
weed out manuscripts that do not fit certainbook for that matter. You cannot even find it in a
established submission criteria. However, manyclassroom setting. Books and classes can only
never make it to the editor's desk, simplyserve to help you bring the reason(s) to the
because they are badly disorganized andsurface, but the answer must come from you.
downright incoherent.How then, do you determine your book’s
But even if you are self-publishing, you owe it topurpose? How can you be certain that it is more
yourself as well as your readers to develop athan a good story? Your book’s purpose
theme. Not only will a theme tell what your bookis, to a great degree, intertwined with your
is about, it also serves to hold your bookpurpose.
together. Every other element — your chapters,Mark Victor Hansen, co-creator of the Chicken
for example — should support your theme. It isSoup series suggests meditation, or deep,
what keeps you from rambling all over the place,controlled, concentrated thought. He says, "Relax
and if you should stray, it is what can bring youand tap into your mind, way back there in the
back — if you keep it in front of you.deepest, secret compartment of your mind, by
That’s literally, as well as figuratively. Iasking yourself this question: ‘If I knew my life
wouldn’t begin to write or give a talkpurpose, what would it be?’ Don’t
without having a developed theme. Have youjust ask it once. Keep asking this question until
ever been to a banquet or meeting where theyou get the answer. It may not come the first
speaker went on and on with a speech that wasday, or even the first week. But it’s there,
all over the place, talking about everything underand it will show its face if you earnestly ask."
the sun, except the topic the audience wasHansen states that this should be repeated every
waiting to hear about? Most likely it wasn’tmorning and every night for 15 minutes until the
because the speaker didn’t have a topic,answer comes to you, and then write it down. He
but rather it was because the speakercontinues, “Be open to the answer, no matter
didn’t have or didn’t take the timewhen it comes to you. Remember, it wants you
to develop a theme. If you want your story tojust as much as you want it.”
be just as disjointed —then don’t developA good theme does three things: 1) it describes
a theme for it.the story or book; 2) it captures the uniqueness
Unlike a working title that may change toof the story or book; 3) it motivates the author.
something else entirely different or even severalIf it accomplishes these three things, it will also
times before a manuscript is finished, a thememake your outline easier to create. In
shouldn’t change during the course of yourbusiness-speak, an “elevator speech” is a
writing. It may become more obvious during thebrief description about your company that you
writing process, but I advise writers to spendshould be able to give to someone in the time it
serious time developing their theme so that theywould take to ride up an elevator.