Tips on Writing Your First Novel

I wrote my first novel almost 15 years ago. I hadyears back. Since then, I've written four others.
never written anything except as a schoolOne is about a talking tree in the Mayan jungle,
assignment. So, what qualified me to write? Well, Ianother is about a drug from China that causes
had read a lot; the classics, sci-fi, adventurevirtual reality, another takes place in the Grand
novels, and a variety of everything else. But I alsoCanyon about the birthplace of all life and finally
thought I had a vivid imagination that couldone discusses the possibility of a modern-day
translate well into the written word. The problemJesus. So, as an author, what would I recommend
was, I had no idea where to begin. I had a fewto anyone considering beginning a novel? Here are
plots knocking around in my head but no clear-cutmy basic tips:
direction. So I decided to tackle a much smaller- Start with a short story of less than 30 pages.
project first. I wrote a short story about my- Write about something you know or interests
days growing up in London, and later, New York.you.
It was only five pages, but it got me started. I- Make an outline and detail the characters,
still needed an opening, a storyline, and asetting, and plot.
conclusion. With that out of the way, I began a- Write a plausible and interesting ending.
simple outline for a novel.- Use believable dialogue, something used
My first novel was again about me. I used myeveryday.
own town and other things I knew to fill out a- Stick with common grammar and vocabulary
sci-fi adventure novel about someone whoand don't get too cute.
experiences a hole in our multi-dimensional world- Once finished, reread and edit until you can't
and passes through into the unknown. Because Istand it anymore.
had been raised in New Jersey, I used all theThe last one may be the toughest of all. You
landmarks that were familiar. As I thought aboutneed to read the completed manuscript and have
the plot and characters, I raced toward an ending.your friends and relatives read it too. Does it
It was at that moment I realized somethingmake sense? Let them be critical. Besides the
fundamental to a novel. It must have a satisfyingobvious spelling, grammar, and punctuation
ending. I took days to figure out how to end thisproblems, look for other weaknesses. Does it
tale. Finally, I had something that made sense andflow logically? Are the characters and settings
it was only then that I began to write.believable? In my novel, I needed the readers to
When I finished, I tried to get it published. But,a take a leap of faith regarding how a man could
once again, I had no direction so I had no luckregenerate, but I back it up with some scientific
finding anyone willing to publish my work. So Ireasoning. If you introduce something too strange,
decided to keep writing instead. I had ideas foryou might lose your viewer. Then, once you're
four other books that needed to be put on paper.happy with the result, put it away for at least a
My second book was far better than the first.month. Then pick it up and reread it again. Do this
The idea sprang from a visit my wife and I madeat least three times. I guarantee that each time
to her 85 year old grandfather back in Westyou will find something to change or edit. It's
Virginia. He lived the past 30 years in the sametough to read your own work, especially if you
house he had shared with his recently deceasedknow exactly what will happen next.
wife. He was self-sufficient and loved the holler heOnce you think you're ready to publish, decide on
inhabited. I wondered how old he might live toone of these directions. You can (1) self-publish
become.with someone like where you pay per book or (2)
From that simple premise came my story. It's atry using either a literary agent or (3) submit
tale about an old man who lived to be 150 yearsdirectly to a publisher that is accepting new
old in West Virginia. He suddenly becomes amanuscripts. Any of these outlets can be found
young man again and word leaks out to someon the Internet. I recently ended up writing a
wealthy old men in New York. He decide thatnon-fiction book about my life in the Yellow Page
perhaps he holds the secret to youth. They wouldindustry which has sold better than my novels.
do anything to be young again with all theirBut for you, I suggest you start mapping out that
money. So they began their quest to capture thisshort story and diving into the world of literary
unique man and uncover his riddle. I called itpleasures, from an author's point of view. Good
"Pursuit of the Phoenix," and published it a fewluck and good writing.