Writing A Manuscript - Editing Styles

Whenever you correct or make changes in aYou need to discuss this in advance of performing
book manuscript, what you're doing is editing thatthe work, sounding the client out on his or her
manuscript. I've been in the business of helpingbudgetary requirements. Also, you must consider
people write their books for over the pastthe nature of the book you are working on. Is it
twenty-five years, and I've helped many aa major money-maker, or likely to never sell very
first-time author put a manuscript together in awidely? Would you like to charge by the hour, by
way that made it more readable, enjoyable,the completed page, or would you like to ask for
saleable and finally -- marketable. You can do thisa percentage of the book's gross or net sales?
too, with proper training, some experience and aYou must determine these matters before you
solid working knowledge of written language anddecide on your fees, and both you and the book
its capabilities.author must agree to all such terms. You may
There are three basic methods of helping aneven need to sign a formal contract.
author write or edit a manuscript: ghost writing,Whenever you receive a manuscript from an
rewriting, and copy editing. There is also a lesserauthor, or a request to "look at" his or her
style of editing called proof reading. The firstmaterial and judge what needs to be done with it,
method I will discuss is ghost writing. That is whenreview the materials the author is willing to
you work from the materials the author givesrelease very carefully. Explain to the author that
you, but you actually write the book yourself. Youall original material is fully copyrighted under the
might be using audio and/or video tapes andUS copyrights law of 1989, and that all nations
written materials, making phone calls, taking noteswith copyrights treaties with the US cover this as
as you go, or holding meetings and interviews.well. This is a simpler matter than it may appear
You also may be doing some research on relatedto be, and there are usually only a few applicable
topics or to add more material to the book. Oncelaws. You should also explain that the partial or
you have what you need, you actually do the jobcompleted manuscript can be registered with the
of writing everything by yourself, but with someUS Copyrights Office. Many potential authors are
help from the person hiring you for the job. Thisquite relieved when they find out they will always
person will usually be listed as the actual author ofown full copyrights to their own original material,
the book.no matter who looks at it, unless they sign any of
You may supply new material, new characters,them away. And unless they sign any such rights
fresh nuances, etc. for the book. But ghost writingover to you, you are releasing all rights you have
can also be on the fine edge of rewriting. Forto the material you write for the book, even your
example, the ideas laid out by the original authornew or original material, to the actual author. This
may fully enter your writing of the book,is because you are being paid for the single job of
sometimes as originally constructed by the author.writing the book for someone else.
You may rewrite major portions of what theBut how do you begin to work? Once you have a
original author wrote, or largely rearrange thegood idea of approximately what's needed to turn
writing to suit needed purposes. Or you maythe material you will have at your disposal into a
simply rewrite a manuscript that was prettyfull-fledged marketable book manuscript, ask the
much formally written by the author. This is nearauthor for a five- to ten-page sample of his or
the finer edges of copy editing, where what youher work. Often, the beginning chapter of the
actually do is simply correct the major and minorbook will do. If you are strictly ghost writing, ask
mistakes made by the original author.the author to give you some ideas and create
The differences between ghost writing and copyabout ten pages of readable material from them.
editing are not always heavily pronounced. TheyYou will then use this "free sample" to show the
can be quite subtle. But usually ghost writingauthor your skills and what you can do to craft a
involves writing by yourself, and copy editingterrific book. Also, don't forget to sound out the
involves making minor to major structural, syntaxauthor on his or her total budget and figure out a
and grammatical changes in someone else'sdecent rate for the work you will be performing.
writing. And rewriting usually involves heavilyYou might call it "light to medium copy editing" or
rearranging or entirely writing over again what"research and ghost writing" or "simple proof
someone else originally wrote. Some peoplereading." Then set a schedule of payments and
consider it to be ghost writing when you simplytime to complete the manuscript with your client.
take an author's ideas and rearrange them intoWhatever you decide, behave professionally by
readable material, while other people consider thatyour own standards, and get the client to agree
to be rewriting. A major job of rewriting mightto a definite plan. This is the best possible course
involved adding a new "voice" to the material, orof action for you to take in regard to working on
making changes in the general writing style, whicha book manuscript. Remember, this is a job, and
may be superfluous, exaggerative, or simplyyou are doing your best to both produce a great
downright dull.book for the client and to be paid what your skills
Copy editing or editing, on the other hand, usuallyare worth.
involves keeping to the style of the originalFinally, you will begin to work on what will be
writing, without adding much if any of your owneither your client's own masterpiece, or if an
writing "voice" to it. What you're doing is perhapsagreement is struck, a book co-authored by the
comparable to repairing the material to reflecttwo of you. This can work quite well, and gives
greater consistency in the writing, while trying toyou a lot more credit for your writing. You can
keep within the boundaries of what the originalget your name on the book spine and jacket, and
author wants. You might be making severalpossibly make more money from the book as an
changes in grammar, suggesting syntax changesequal partner of the client. Or if you want to
which entail remaking word order, and perhapsremain "ghostly," you may request the client to
you will be adding new words and phrases,consider you the "editor" of the book, asking only
correcting punctuation, and changing some of thefor credit somewhere within its pages. This is
sentence structuring. You may be writing some ofoften done by listing you on the
your own fresh material again here, as when youacknowledgements page. It might state, "This
do ghost writing. But when copy editing and notbook would never have been accomplished
ghost writing is involved, there will not usually bewithout the help of my editor, So and So." That
major additions of new book material.way you have hard evidence that you actually
On the other hand, you can certainly mesh bothworked on the book. But if you feel you did more
copy editing and ghost writing, which is largely athan mere editing, you may request that the
lot of what rewriting entails. You might researchclient put "Ghostwritten by So and So"
additional material and intersperse it where it'ssomewhere, so the world will know about the
needed in places throughout the manuscript, orhard work you performed. In the bad old days,
you might rewrite the opening "hook" so that itusually all the byline a ghost writer could hope to
"grabs" the readers' attention in a more arrestingreceive was "editor," but nowadays it may be
manner. You could also possibly create a brandpermissible to use the terms "ghost writer." It is
new ending for the book, and spice up thelargely up to the discretion of your client, who
closings for its various chapters, to make themay still want to be viewed as the actual author
book more dramatic, give it more "flair," and addof the book. In that case, remember that you
more "spice" and substance to it. All this can beare being paid to be a ghost, and you are
done while still keeping to the original author'srelinquishing all rights to the writing and material in
"voice" and maintaining an editing or copy editingthe manuscript because you are being paid to
style when it comes to the remainder of thework for the client.
manuscript.You will also need to make certain assessments
Sometimes you will find that a book contains onlywhen it comes to creating a truly fine, hopefully
grammatical errors and doesn't need much actualbest-selling and clearly wonderful fiction or
editing, except for grammar and syntax or minornon-fiction book, and when figuring out what
structural errors. Sometimes it might also requireexactly you are going to charge to do the job. Is
some fact checking for consistency. Fact checkingthis the kind of book that will likely become a best
involves making sure that a character's name isseller, or not? Could you stand to make serious
always spelled the same way, that a townmoney if instead of payment in advance, you
remains to the north and doesn't suddenly slipaccept a percentage of the book's eventual sales
down south, and keeping to other such factualover time? Whether payment is made for the
consistencies. This style of editing is called proofactual construction of the manuscript or you are
reading the manuscript, and is also always the lastwilling to work "on spec," or you agree with the
thing you do before you turn in your final copy ofclient to use a combination of both, you will have
it to the client, whether you ghost write, rewrite,to make these arrangements in advance of
copy edit or simply end up proof reading it. Youperforming the job. As I said before, you may
must also try to proof read the manuscript whileeven need to sign a multi-party book contract,
you are working on it, but you can save someone which may involve a potential book publisher
errors for the final proofing of the copy.or literary agent. Please remember that the
Charges for the above services, as you'veamount of work involved is the greatest
probably guessed, vary widely. You would ofdeterminant when it comes to figuring out what
course charge more for greater work involved,you are going to do and how much time it is
especially if you're doing most of the writing. Mostgoing to take, as well as how much you should
ghost writers also charge more for research,charge. But it can be very important to consider
sometimes by the hour. It all depends on howbook sales as well, and you should discuss this
much time and effort you feel you need to putwith the client.
into the writing. You need to get a good grasp ofNowadays the writing fields of copy editing,
exactly how much work is probably going to berewriting and ghost writing are burgeoning and
involved, and how much time it is going to takegrowing faster than ever, especially with the
you. If you are writing the book from scratch,increasing amount of self-publishing services and
using the author's ideas and doing a lot of "sidethe ready availability of writer's resources on the
research" where you are looking up ideas for newInternet. Therefore it is imperative that as a
material, this would be considered upper levelfreelance writer you know which styles of
ghost writing, or "ghosting." You should then"editing" you will be using to create a new book's
charge commensurate to the greater amount ofcontent, and how you are going to arrange your
work involved.particularized work schedule and payments. You
However, if all you're doing is proof reading ormust also work in a timely manner and behave
"proofing" the manuscript, naturally you wouldprofessionally at all times. By carefully polishing a
charge far less money to properly perform suchbook manuscript written for someone else to a
a service for the would-be book author. And whatgleaming perfection of its beauty and attainment,
you would charge for copy editing or rewritingyou will enable the entertainment and information
would once again depend largely on the amountgained from it to become as powerful, readable,
of time and work involved. But you also need tosaleable and marketable as both you and the
consider the budgetary needs of the client. Someclient want it to be.
clients have more money to spend, some less.