Writing a Novel - Three Stages of the Middle

EarlyThis is a good place for internal conflict. Just like
In the early middle, the protagonist is confrontedreal life, the protagonist begins with a number of
with the event in the first plot point and begins tochoices she can make. However by the end of
get involved in the plot problem. The beginning ofthe novel, the ideal situation is to have the
the middle will have exciting events as the heroprotagonist faced with only two options. Her
or heroine deals with obstacle created by the plotchoice of one of those will lead to the climax. But
point. His or her reactions to this obstacle willin the middle of the middle, the heroine may have
show how he or she grows or changes, or if hea number of choices. Start taking away her
or she will grow or change.options, either by her own choice or because of
Do not use this section to bore the reader withactions of the other characters.
interesting diatribes based on your research. AtEnd
this stage, the reader should have begun to reallyAt the end of the middle, the heroine or hero
care about the protagonist and the focus shouldshould be under some time pressure. Make the
be on the main characters. Begin contrasting andneed to choose one option urgent.
comparing the lead characters and show hints ofShe (I use 'she' because saying he or she gets
how they will deal with the major conflict of thecumbersome) will have to consider her situation
novel.and the conflicts she has to deal with. She is
At the early middle stage, your secondaryforced to re-evaluate what she is doing. This calls
characters should be introduced and theirfor internal conflict to meet external conflict. The
relationships with the protagonist developed. Areprotagonist has to overcome the internal to
they friend or enemy?address the external, or perhaps she overcomes
The subplots should be underway by this time.the external, which gives her the strength to
Begin to show how the subplots relate to theaddress the internal.
main plot and the development of the problem.Resolve a sub-plot or two, so that the resolution
Middlecontributes to the final climactic events. By the
By the middle of the middle, you have all theend of the middle, the heroine will have to face
characters introduced and a problem for the heroanother plot point. Whatever it is, it must force
to overcome. Give the reader a break from thethe protagonist to make a choice between two
fast pace. Have a quiet scene or two, allowing theoptions. Make it intense and dramatic here. This
characters to get to know each other moremoves you into the ending of the novel.
intimately.